# Appraisal Examples: What Good Ones Look Like and How to Write Yours Canonical URL: https://headwayskills.com/knowledge/working-with-your-manager/appraisal-examples/ Markdown URL: https://headwayskills.com/knowledge/working-with-your-manager/appraisal-examples.md Entity type: Article Last updated: 2026-07-07 Language: en Primary audience: professionals improving working with your manager at work Owner: Headway Skills Contact: https://headwayskills.com/contact/ ## Short answer See what strong appraisal examples look like, the main types of performance appraisal, and how to write comments that are specific, balanced, and forward-looking. ## Key facts - Title: Appraisal Examples: What Good Ones Look Like and How to Write Yours - Category: Working with Your Manager - Primary skill: Working with Your Manager - Related skills: Building Self-Awareness, Communication - Primary keyword: appraisal examples - Source page: https://headwayskills.com/knowledge/working-with-your-manager/appraisal-examples/ ## What this page covers - See what strong appraisal examples look like, the main types of performance appraisal, and how to write comments that are specific, balanced, and forward-looking. - Practical guidance for appraisal examples - How this topic connects to Working with Your Manager ## Detailed explanation Appraisal examples are sample comments used in a performance appraisal — either the [self-appraisal](/knowledge/working-with-your-manager/self-appraisal/) you write about your own work or the feedback a manager writes about yours. The strongest ones share a shape: they name a specific behavior, the impact it had, and what to do next. Reaching for examples when you're staring at a blank appraisal form is normal, and there's nothing wrong with it — a solid template beats a vague line you'll wish you hadn't written. But the examples that actually work aren't the ones you copy word for word; they're the ones you adapt. And which kind of appraisal you're in changes what a good example even looks like. ## The main types of performance appraisal Performance appraisals aren't all the same thing, and each type produces a different kind of example. Knowing which one you're dealing with tells you what a strong comment should sound like — a line that lands in a self-appraisal can fall flat in a peer's feedback. These are the methods you're most likely to meet. ### Self-appraisal (self-assessment) In a self-appraisal, you evaluate your own performance — rating yourself against your role's criteria and writing comments on what you achieved and where you want to grow — which then feeds your manager's [formal review](/knowledge/working-with-your-manager/performance-reviews/). The examples here are written in the first person, about you, and that's exactly where they most often go wrong. Across the employee-facing guides — Deel, Culture Amp, Lattice, Indeed — the most common failure is writing about effort instead of outcomes: "I worked hard this year" tells a manager nothing. Swap it for a result, such as "I delivered four projects on time and around 10% under budget," and the same sentence becomes evidence. Balance it, too — one genuine strength paired with one honest development area reads as self-aware rather than either boastful or self-critical. ### Manager (top-down) appraisal This is the traditional evaluation your direct manager writes, assessing you against the expectations of your role and owning the final written record. Because the manager's words become part of that record, the examples have to be behavior-based and backed by evidence, not personality judgments. "Good communicator" is the kind of line the appraisal guides — PerformYard, Rippling, Leapsome — warn against; something like "adapts communication style for technical and non-technical audiences, which cut cross-team misunderstandings" names the behavior and its impact, so it holds up. ### 360-degree (multi-source) feedback A 360-degree appraisal gathers feedback from several directions at once — your manager, your peers, sometimes the people who report to you, plus your own self-assessment — to build a rounded picture instead of leaning on one viewpoint. The examples come from many colleagues, so themes matter more than any single comment: when the same strength or the same [blind spot](/knowledge/self-awareness/how-to-identify-your-strengths/) surfaces from different people, that's the part worth acting on. ### Management by Objectives (MBO) and goal-based appraisals In an MBO appraisal, you and your manager agree on [measurable goals](/knowledge/working-with-your-manager/performance-goals/) at the start of a period, and performance is judged by how far you met them. The examples aren't trait ratings — they're goal-attainment statements tied to targets set in advance, such as hitting a specific number or shipping a defined deliverable. Modern variants like OKRs work the same way. This is the format where vague wording has the least room to hide, because the standard was fixed before the period began. ### Behaviorally Anchored Rating Scale (BARS) BARS combines a numerical rating with written descriptions of what each level of performance actually looks like in behavior. Every score is anchored to a described action rather than a bare number, so an example reads as a behavior-at-a-level — "consistently does X" for the top rating, "occasionally does Y" further down — which makes the rating harder to dispute and easier to learn from. ## What makes an appraisal example actually work Strip away the format and the strongest appraisal examples all move the same way. First, they're specific: the guides that dominate this topic agree that vague praise is as useless as vague criticism — "great attitude" and "needs to improve" give no one anything to act on. Second, they follow a three-part shape — name the behavior, describe its impact, then point to the next step — so a comment sets up what better looks like instead of just scoring the past. Third, they're balanced, carrying at least one real strength alongside at least one honest area to work on. And they protect the working relationship: constructive lines describe an observation rather than attack a person, which is why "I've noticed you've often arrived later than usual — is there anything we should discuss?" works where "you're always late" only puts someone on the defensive. The hard part of a self-appraisal is turning all of that into honest, specific claims about your own work — and it's genuinely difficult to write pointedly about strengths you've never consciously named. If your appraisal is coming up, it can help to [see where your strengths lie](https://assessment.headwayskills.com/) first, so the examples you choose are ones you can actually stand behind rather than lines you borrowed and hoped would fit. ## The skills that decide how an appraisal goes Look closely at the examples that work, and the same few capabilities keep surfacing underneath them. Whether you're writing your own comments or reading your manager's, handling an appraisal well comes down less to the phrasing than to a handful of habits you can build. **Working with Your Manager** does the most work here. An appraisal is the manager relationship at its highest stakes, and the people who get something out of it treat it as a partnership they help shape — preparing thoroughly, making their results visible, keeping the focus on what comes next, and actually asking for what they want. The examples are raw material; this is what lets you use them instead of sitting through a verdict. **Building Self-Awareness** is what makes a self-appraisal ring true and keeps a manager's feedback from landing like an attack. It's the honest read on your own strengths and blind spots that separates a specific, credible self-assessment from a generic one — plus the habit of understanding feedback first and reflecting on it, rather than getting defensive at a clumsy comment or crushed by a fair one. **Communication** turns any of this into words that land. A good example is really a communication choice: clear and direct, leading with the result, phrased positively — the move that swaps "I worked hard" for a concrete outcome, or delivers a hard point without bruising the relationship. None of the three is a trait you're born with — each is a habit built on top of how you already work, and each is one of the twelve skills the free Work Skills Test measures. Since an appraisal leans on exactly these, [seeing which ones to strengthen](https://assessment.headwayskills.com/) is a practical way to prepare for the next one. ## What this means for you You might notice you already do some of this — describing a result instead of the effort behind it, or naming where you want to grow before someone names it for you. Those instincts are the starting material; the rest is practice, and it stays learnable wherever you're beginning from, without having to become someone else to get better at it. It's worth building, too, because the further you go, the more of your standing gets decided in appraisals like these rather than by the work alone. And by reading through examples before your review instead of improvising on the day, you're already doing the part most people skip — which makes the next step a small one. That read is exactly what the Work Skills Test gives you. It's a **free**, seven-minute self-assessment of the twelve work skills this article keeps circling back to — including the ones that decide how an appraisal goes — and it shows you, in plain language, where you're already strong and which one or two skills would repay the most attention next. Walk into your next appraisal with that baseline and you're not guessing how you're doing; you're choosing which examples are genuinely yours to tell. The only thing left is to see where you stand. ## Who this is for - Professionals building practical workplace skills - Readers looking for specific, usable work advice - Managers, educators, and coaches supporting career readiness ## Common questions ### What is this guide about? See what strong appraisal examples look like, the main types of performance appraisal, and how to write comments that are specific, balanced, and forward-looking. ### Which Headway skill does this connect to? This guide connects primarily to Working with Your Manager. It also relates to Building Self-Awareness, Communication. ### What is the recommended next step? Use the free Work Skills Test to reflect on which work skill to improve next. ## Related pages - https://headwayskills.com/knowledge.md - https://headwayskills.com/knowledge/working-with-your-manager.md - https://headwayskills.com/knowledge/self-awareness.md - https://headwayskills.com/knowledge/communication.md - https://headwayskills.com/work-skills-test.md ## Citation guidance Use the canonical page when citing this content: https://headwayskills.com/knowledge/working-with-your-manager/appraisal-examples/ Preferred summary: "See what strong appraisal examples look like, the main types of performance appraisal, and how to write comments that are specific, balanced, and forward-looking." ## Change log - 2026-07-07: Content collection version published.